Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Urban and Rural Community Differences

This country has two predominant societies within it. There are rural communities where most of the time safety and noise levels are not issues. Communities are more spread out, but more family oriented. Rural communities do not have major conveniences or a variety of things to offer such as schools. Urban communities have higher crime rate and neighbors are closer together, but people do not know each other. Urban communities have conveniences that are not offered by rural neighborhoods including many different things such as the school system. This paper will look at the differences between these two neighborhoods.

            During the last twenty years, the rural community in which I have lived has had very little violent crime. In the last year we have only had one murder. One is too many, but compare that to the city of Springfield where there have been twelve murders already this year. In a rural community, you do not have to worry about gangs or someone who just wants to shoot someone else in a drive-by. In the community I live in everybody knows everyone and watches out for each other. The houses are not very close together, but the people of the community know what is going on around them. In an urban community, the people live right beside one another, but they do not know what is going on in each other’s lives. They do not watch out for each other. In rural communities it is safe enough for you to leave your house unlocked and leave the keys in your car. It is even safe enough to walk outside by yourself at night. It would not be safe to do any of those things in an urban neighborhood, even if there was a Neighborhood Watch put in place.

            There is a big difference in the noise level in a rural community and in an urban community. In a rural community the main noises you hear are tractors and machinery during the day and insects at night. It is a very peaceful place where you can hear yourself think. In an urban community you constantly hear people talking and cars driving by. There is almost always something going on and it is rarely quiet. You cannot hear yourself talk, let alone hear yourself think.

Another big difference concerning the two communities is the school systems. In the rural community where I live, there is one elementary school and one high school. If public school is the school of your choice, you do not have a choice. You will have to drive to another town for either another public school or a private school. In an urban community, there are many elementary, middle, and high schools as well as many private schools to choose from. One advantage to the rural schools is smaller class sizes and more individualized instruction.

 Due to a larger tax base in the urban communities, their schools have more money available. Rural communities do not have the financial backing that the urban communities have. Because of this, in a sense, you get what you pay for. In most cases, the more money you can offer the teacher, the better qualified the teacher will be. The more qualified teachers the school has, the better the school will be.

Also due to that larger tax base, there is more money available for activities. In rural schools you have limited extracurricular activities including clubs and sports. At the high school in my hometown there are only three sports that are played: basketball, baseball, and volleyball. Compare that to the many different sports teams in the urban schools including swimming, basketball, baseball, volleyball, football, tennis, golf, soccer, and track.

             One major advantage of the urban community is the convenience and the variety of supermarkets, department stores, specialty shops, and entertainment centers. In most rural communities you do not have all of these conveniences. There will usually be a grocery store, but not a supermarket. Rural communities typically do not have the luxury of having a department store or entertainment center, but there is usually a specialty shop of some kind on Main Street.

Another benefit of an urban community is the hospital. The distance of a hospital could be a matter of life and death. Also in many urban communities you have the option to choose from at least two hospitals plus urgent care centers. In most rural communities there are no hospitals available and many only have one clinic with one doctor available only on weekdays. Ambulance response time in rural communities is typically thirty minutes or more.

One of the many advantages of rural communities is the lack of rules and regulations. Most rural communities do not have zoning or building regulations. The owner can build any type of building on his or her own property without government interference. There are also no limitations on outdoor burning, water usage, trash disposable, and automobile storage. Residents can burn leaves, trash, or any other item without restriction. They can also use as much water as they want and park their cars wherever they want. In urban communities there is zoning and building regulations where you have to have building permits. Building permits are required for the initial construction of the house as well as roofing, electrical repairs, driveway construction, or any other major improvements. Most urban communities have restrictions on open burning and water usage. They also have restrictions on trash disposal and automobile storage. You cannot leave an unlicensed vehicle setting in the driveway or yard in many urban communities.

In summary, urban communities appear to have more advantages, but if you start digging a little deeper you see that rural communities have the most advantages and a better quality of life.

11 comments:

Lucas said...

You make very valid points covering this topic in almost every way. I too live in a more rural community in the middle countryside of Lauderdale county in Alabama. Living in the rural setting has been a blessing to me, although I live in a rural community a larger city with everything Jackson has is only 25 minutes away from my house. I get to observe daily the advantages and disadvantages of living in both rural and urban settings. I thought your overall points were good except that maybe you would want to address how people living in rural communities might have to drive to work longer, drive to town, ect. I don’t know how it is exactly where you live back home but in Alabama each governing county is allotted a certain amount of money by the state to be distributed equally among schools inside the county and city school system so the quality of education should be about the same for each school in that system. You may want to check into that regarding your statements about the schools systems, it may be different where you’re from or I could just be completely wrong but I think it’s worth looking in to. You may also want to work more on your opening and closing paragraphs and transition between paragraphs. I think you have covered the topic very well and it seemed like you stuck to the outline and formatting given by Mr. Segars which is great because that’s what he’s focused on. Keep up the good work and remember to keep the good format when you add/change things in your paper.

Brian said...

I agree with a lot of the things that you said. I think that there are many advantages and disadvantages of both communities. I grew up in a Urban town and love it. I actually live just on the outside of an urban community so I kind of get the best of both worlds. I loved that I was not stuck in the middle of a very busy town, but I could be there in 5 minutes if I wanted to. I think that the hospital is a big deal. I think that having a hospital and emergency response close by is a very big advantage for the urban communities. It is also very nice to have many different restaurants and other attractions around so that you never get bored and you don't have to keep doing the same things over and over again. I do think that the peacefulness of a rural community is very nice. I like not having cars driving by all the time and people around all the time. I agree with you when you said that the crime rate is up in the urban communities but i think that it has something to do with there being a lot more people living there and so there is more opportunity for crime to occur. Over all I thought that it was very good.

Aaron said...

Sasha,
Your thesis is your first sentence. It could be probably be stated more clearly by combining your first two sentences. Your background information about the differences in urban and rural culture seems to fit well with your thesis, though I haven’t read your entire paper.

Mackenzie said...

Your thesis i thought was at the beginning. This is a good subject and your pointed your main points very well at the beginning of the essay, maybe if you added a small example of what a your topic is, it wont be so "this is what i am going to talk about"

rachelle.Prince said...

My guess to your thesis would have to be when you said, "Urban communities have conveniences that are not offered by rural neighborhoods including many different things such as the school system". When I was reading, I could tell what the paper was going to be focusing on, the difference between two types of neighborhoods. I think that your thesis doesn't need to be changed because it was clear on what was going to be presented. When I read the first paragraph it just talked about crime and i think that you could have led the reader into the difference in school system first because thats what i got out of the first paragraph thesis, if that's even your thesis. You have a couple sentence that make up your thesis. You could probably list more then one convenience that the urban communities have instead of just school system in your intro, just to let the reader know more detail about the essay.

Stephanie said...

I think that your essay was organized very well. Your paper was always on topic and never trailed off from the main idea. The way you analyzed both types of neighborhoods was perfect for a compare/contrast essay.

Rachel Dudley said...

I think that your essay was very good. Your last paragraph could have used some more length, but as far as the whole essay you really did a good job on making everything very organized and structured.

Julianna said...

The paragraph about schools could be more coherent. The sentence "If public school is the school of your choice, you do not have a choice" especially threw me off.

k.graves said...

I think that more information should be added to the closing paragraph. There needs to be more information to bring everything to a close.

Andrew said...

Your last paragraph is not really a paragraph, it's a sentence. It sums up what you have to say, but I would say it's too concise. Expand a bit.

rhendrix said...

I think that the closing paragraph should be a little longer. You could try restating the thesis sentence again in a different way to close it out.